Gwen GYM scene kind of ruined her for me. Gwen asking to be spotted then says Usually I ask one of the guys, but since we're here alone... then you accept and I'm like wait you do this with randoms? fuck off ya GYM ho lmfao.
Oh, this is definitely a 'lost in translation' moment. In the original Russian script, Gwen uses a gender-neutral term for 'folks' or 'peers' (rebyata), referring to gym staff or regulars she knows. She’s a serious athlete, so she’s talking about professional spotting, not random guys.
There's a few part where the text is in Russian. I can't remember when the first one was but the 2nd one was when they meet at the pub before the go to the school building thats being blocked off.
Alex - Но это не значит, что ты даже не был готов драться. Ты даже граммором не видишь.
But that doesn't mean you weren't even ready to fight.
There's another bug where you can mock the Redhead for anime pictures or defend her. I chose the mock and it played that scene and then restarted and played the other option right after it.
Hey! Thank you so much for the detailed feedback and for pointing out those specific moments.
I’ve just released a new Hotfix (v0.3.7) that addresses these exact issues:
Scene Logic: I fixed the bug in the scene where both choices (mocking or defending the redhead) would play back-to-back. Now the branching works correctly based on your decision!
Localization: I’ve gone through the script and translated the dialogue you mentioned (and several others). While there might still be a few stray Russian lines hiding in the deep corners of the code, I’ve done my best to minimize them.
I’m truly sorry for the immersion-breaking glitches. I hope this fix makes your experience in the world of The Veil much smoother. Thanks for sticking with me and helping improve the game!
I hope to see some creampies soon, the lewd scenes currently available are nice and the animations are great in my opinion. Just hoping to see MC cumming inside the girls or at least give us the option to. Also hoping for some sort of pregnancy as well, even if its at later updates in the story. Pulling out is nice and all but nothing like unloading into your LIs. If you don't plan to add pregnancy, at least let us creampie the girls and have them say they're on birth control or that it's a "safe day".
Other than that, I enjoyed the latest update, looking forward to more!
Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed the animations and the overall quality of the scenes.
Regarding your suggestions: 'Creampies' will definitely be part of the game one way or another, so you won't have to worry about that. However, I’m not planning to add a pregnancy mechanic to the story.
As for your question about the LIs being virgins: Yes, there are some in the cast! But I’m not going to tell you who exactly just yet - I’ll leave that for you to discover. Though, I have a feeling the answer might be quite predictable for some of you ;)
there seems to be some sort of bug when phone notifications are on the screen. they are not English so I can't understand any of what the texts are saying. and yes I have the preference for English in the settings
This is just an example since this is where I am in the story. But it's like this with every texting conversation. The first message is always in Russian. But the rest of the text are in English, just the first of each message.
Yes, I understand. The game engine did not create a field for translating these lines. I will try to fix this. I apologize for the inconvenience and incomplete immersion in the game world. You can use a photo translator if you find it convenient.
The fight scenes and dance sequences are pretty good but there are two drawbacks First some of the later plot is a bit too cliché Second the dialogue boxes are too dark Fix these two issues and it'll be perfect The game's plot is really surprising I never expected the elf from the Eternal World to appear here in this way It seems she's going to make a comeback and become the female lead Let's make some analogies Second it looks like Hannah along with Ferran and Amy are from the same school just in different classes Pay attention to the details the school uniforms are exactly the same and the background next to them is also identical Third our male protagonist said he works out in his dreams and it directly translates to reality making him stronger Could he be the second hidden Moon Clan member Third dude I think you're being conceited snap out of it This game themed around dreams has a very interesting setting where the protagonist Max is a member of the Moon Clan The male lead Nate also had a nightmare and so did Max Both dreams took place on campus where their most important people and friends were killed Familiar scenes familiar content Nate felt a chill down his spine Hey buddy did you miss me Max was confused when Lucy said that Hahaha this part is definitely a genuine tribute👍🏻
Hi, great game! I really enjoyed the characters with their own personalities. I'd like to suggest something for the game: a little map exploration, how to arrange a date, and a job to buy gifts and more alluring lingerie for the girls.
Hello, developer. I recently learned about this game and am currently playing it. I think it's really great. May I ask if Chinese will be included in the future version? Some game-sharing platforms have added AI-translated Chinese, but these platforms charge for it. I hope there will also be a Chinese translation in future versions. I don't really want to pay on pirated sharing websites. I'd rather spend money on supporting developers. Besides, the invitation link on Discord has expired. Can it be reset? I need a more direct way of communication.
I’ve updated the Discord link - it should work now.
About the Chinese translation: I’m not sure I can deliver a high-quality version right away. With English and Russian I can control all the nuances myself, but for Chinese it’s harder to guarantee the same accuracy and tone. That said, I have been considering adding it, and I’m looking into how I could implement it properly.
If there’s enough interest, I’ll include a Chinese translation — but only when I’m confident it will be accurate, natural, and respectful of all the narrative details. I don’t want to add a language just for the sake of having it; I want every player to enjoy the experience.
Thank you for referring to my suggestions. I hope the game will be a huge success. I'm looking forward to the day when, if possible, you can also try using ai translation. Some short sentences may not be fully expressed, but the basic content can all be accurate
And is the content forced or can it be avoided? By this I mean some fetishes or labels that sometimes appear in the game that aren't to everyone's liking, such as LESBIANS, NTR, femdom, etc. (Especially the foced lesbian shit)
Note: Avoid = the player decides whether it happens or not, as opposed to Skip = the player skips or omits it, but it happens either in the presence of the MC or backstage.
About the harem question - right now I can’t promise anything specific. The main story and worldbuilding are planned several updates ahead, but I’m moviromance routes more gradually, so it’s too early to confirm what the final endings will look like.
And just to be clear: there will be absolutely no NTR in any form.
Regarding “Avoid”: this option will be included in case I ever add very niche or optional fetishes, so players who don’t want them can simply skip that content. I’m not sure whether I’ll add such fetishes at all - probably not - but the option will still exist for convenience.
Sorry for misleading you with my previous answers. I want to clarify: there will be no NTR content in the game. My earlier replies may have sounded too vague and caused some misunderstanding, but to avoid any doubt — such content is not planned for the project.
The lighting is a little off especially for the first two screenshots, the banner one is much better.
Anyway your story or at minimal the genre of your game should surface in a demo. Right now it's hard to even tell which genre this game belongs to. I strongly suggest you rewrite the introduction.
I am guessing it's some sort of horror / psycho thriller with perhaps some paranormal, I could be wrong but the main thing is players shouldn't be left guessing...
Still I'll give this a try when there are a few more updates, all the best in your development and good luck!
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on the visuals and the introduction. Since this is still a demo version, my goal is to gradually build up the story, creating a sense of intrigue and mystery. I understand it might not fully reveal the genre just yet, but I plan to unveil more elements as the game progresses.
I recommend keeping an eye on how the project develops—I think the direction will become clearer with future updates, and I hope it will keep you intrigued. Thanks for your support and for considering giving the game a try. Your feedback is really valuable, and I look forward to sharing more as the game evolves!
I think you need to strike a balance between giving out something to entice players and keeping your cards close.
Right now I feel there's too little to go on and you'll probably miss out on a lot of players since many won't bother to download something they don't even have a clue in which direction the game is going. It would be a shame as there are not too many dark themed HS games out there.
The trick is to reveal a little enough to entice people to download to try and yet retaining flexibility by keeping things vague. Now your demo situation is more like totally no info rather than being vague.
I completely understand where you’re coming from. Right now, I'm still finding my niche and learning the intricacies of game development, which is why the game is marked as being in development with a demo version. My goal with this early release is to set the stage and build interest without revealing too much, but I get that it might currently feel a bit too vague.
As the game progresses, especially with the first major update to version 0.1, more elements of the story will be revealed where they need to be. I’m aiming to strike that balance you mentioned, and I really appreciate your insights on how to improve that approach. Thanks for your support, and I hope you’ll check back to see how the game evolves!
The adult content in the game will primarily include romantic and erotic scenes that explore the relationships between characters. These will be consensual and story-driven, aiming to deepen the connection between characters and enhance the narrative. There will also be elements of fantasy to add some unique twists to these interactions.
I’m focused on creating a mix of romance, intimacy, and passion, without venturing into more extreme fetishes. The goal is to ensure the content feels natural within the story and appealing to a wide range of players. If there are any specific aspects you’re concerned about or would like to see, feel free to let me know!
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Gwen GYM scene kind of ruined her for me. Gwen asking to be spotted then says Usually I ask one of the guys, but since we're here alone... then you accept and I'm like wait you do this with randoms? fuck off ya GYM ho lmfao.
Oh, this is definitely a 'lost in translation' moment. In the original Russian script, Gwen uses a gender-neutral term for 'folks' or 'peers' (rebyata), referring to gym staff or regulars she knows. She’s a serious athlete, so she’s talking about professional spotting, not random guys.
Too late she's a GYM ho now lmfao
There's a few part where the text is in Russian. I can't remember when the first one was but the 2nd one was when they meet at the pub before the go to the school building thats being blocked off.
Alex - Но это не значит, что ты даже не был готов драться. Ты даже граммором не видишь.
But that doesn't mean you weren't even ready to fight.
There's another bug where you can mock the Redhead for anime pictures or defend her. I chose the mock and it played that scene and then restarted and played the other option right after it.
Hey! Thank you so much for the detailed feedback and for pointing out those specific moments.
I’ve just released a new Hotfix (v0.3.7) that addresses these exact issues:
I’m truly sorry for the immersion-breaking glitches. I hope this fix makes your experience in the world of The Veil much smoother. Thanks for sticking with me and helping improve the game!
I hope to see some creampies soon, the lewd scenes currently available are nice and the animations are great in my opinion. Just hoping to see MC cumming inside the girls or at least give us the option to. Also hoping for some sort of pregnancy as well, even if its at later updates in the story. Pulling out is nice and all but nothing like unloading into your LIs. If you don't plan to add pregnancy, at least let us creampie the girls and have them say they're on birth control or that it's a "safe day".
Other than that, I enjoyed the latest update, looking forward to more!
Edit: Also, are any of the LIs virgins?
Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed the animations and the overall quality of the scenes.
Regarding your suggestions: 'Creampies' will definitely be part of the game one way or another, so you won't have to worry about that. However, I’m not planning to add a pregnancy mechanic to the story.
As for your question about the LIs being virgins: Yes, there are some in the cast! But I’m not going to tell you who exactly just yet - I’ll leave that for you to discover. Though, I have a feeling the answer might be quite predictable for some of you ;)
Harem?
Yes
there seems to be some sort of bug when phone notifications are on the screen. they are not English so I can't understand any of what the texts are saying. and yes I have the preference for English in the settings
Oh, can you show me what the error is? I'll take care of it.
This is just an example since this is where I am in the story. But it's like this with every texting conversation. The first message is always in Russian. But the rest of the text are in English, just the first of each message.
Yes, I understand. The game engine did not create a field for translating these lines. I will try to fix this. I apologize for the inconvenience and incomplete immersion in the game world. You can use a photo translator if you find it convenient.
Hey, it's all good! Just wanted to inform you of it so you are aware. Not a big deal for me.
Love the story by the way!
Congrats on version 3 of The Veil, downloading it now!!!
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The fight scenes and dance sequences are pretty good but there are two drawbacks First some of the later plot is a bit too cliché Second the dialogue boxes are too dark Fix these two issues and it'll be perfect The game's plot is really surprising I never expected the elf from the Eternal World to appear here in this way It seems she's going to make a comeback and become the female lead Let's make some analogies Second it looks like Hannah along with Ferran and Amy are from the same school just in different classes Pay attention to the details the school uniforms are exactly the same and the background next to them is also identical Third our male protagonist said he works out in his dreams and it directly translates to reality making him stronger Could he be the second hidden Moon Clan member Third dude I think you're being conceited snap out of it This game themed around dreams has a very interesting setting where the protagonist Max is a member of the Moon Clan The male lead Nate also had a nightmare and so did Max Both dreams took place on campus where their most important people and friends were killed Familiar scenes familiar content Nate felt a chill down his spine Hey buddy did you miss me Max was confused when Lucy said that Hahaha this part is definitely a genuine tribute👍🏻
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Hello, developer. I recently learned about this game and am currently playing it. I think it's really great. May I ask if Chinese will be included in the future version? Some game-sharing platforms have added AI-translated Chinese, but these platforms charge for it. I hope there will also be a Chinese translation in future versions. I don't really want to pay on pirated sharing websites. I'd rather spend money on supporting developers. Besides, the invitation link on Discord has expired. Can it be reset? I need a more direct way of communication.
Thanks for the questions!
I’ve updated the Discord link - it should work now.
About the Chinese translation: I’m not sure I can deliver a high-quality version right away. With English and Russian I can control all the nuances myself, but for Chinese it’s harder to guarantee the same accuracy and tone.
That said, I have been considering adding it, and I’m looking into how I could implement it properly.
If there’s enough interest, I’ll include a Chinese translation — but only when I’m confident it will be accurate, natural, and respectful of all the narrative details. I don’t want to add a language just for the sake of having it; I want every player to enjoy the experience.
Thank you for referring to my suggestions. I hope the game will be a huge success. I'm looking forward to the day when, if possible, you can also try using ai translation. Some short sentences may not be fully expressed, but the basic content can all be accurate
hi boss, expired discord link
Fixed
The discord link is expired :(
Fixed
Hi DEV!
I have important questions:
1.- Will there be content and a harem ending?
And is the content forced or can it be avoided? By this I mean some fetishes or labels that sometimes appear in the game that aren't to everyone's liking, such as LESBIANS, NTR, femdom, etc. (Especially the foced lesbian shit)
Note: Avoid = the player decides whether it happens or not, as opposed to Skip = the player skips or omits it, but it happens either in the presence of the MC or backstage.
Thanks for the questions!
About the harem question - right now I can’t promise anything specific. The main story and worldbuilding are planned several updates ahead, but I’m moviromance routes more gradually, so it’s too early to confirm what the final endings will look like.
And just to be clear: there will be absolutely no NTR in any form.
Regarding “Avoid”: this option will be included in case I ever add very niche or optional fetishes, so players who don’t want them can simply skip that content. I’m not sure whether I’ll add such fetishes at all - probably not - but the option will still exist for convenience.
garbage game really hard to open gallery
What do harem elements mean?
Sorry for misleading you with my previous answers.
I want to clarify: there will be no NTR content in the game. My earlier replies may have sounded too vague and caused some misunderstanding, but to avoid any doubt — such content is not planned for the project.
Thank you for your interest and support!
will this game have lesbian/bi/girl on girl sex scenes threesomes included and if so are they avoidable
Can you make it aviable for the Itch.io app`?
The lighting is a little off especially for the first two screenshots, the banner one is much better.
Anyway your story or at minimal the genre of your game should surface in a demo. Right now it's hard to even tell which genre this game belongs to. I strongly suggest you rewrite the introduction.
I am guessing it's some sort of horror / psycho thriller with perhaps some paranormal, I could be wrong but the main thing is players shouldn't be left guessing...
Still I'll give this a try when there are a few more updates, all the best in your development and good luck!
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on the visuals and the introduction. Since this is still a demo version, my goal is to gradually build up the story, creating a sense of intrigue and mystery. I understand it might not fully reveal the genre just yet, but I plan to unveil more elements as the game progresses.
I recommend keeping an eye on how the project develops—I think the direction will become clearer with future updates, and I hope it will keep you intrigued. Thanks for your support and for considering giving the game a try. Your feedback is really valuable, and I look forward to sharing more as the game evolves!
I think you need to strike a balance between giving out something to entice players and keeping your cards close.
Right now I feel there's too little to go on and you'll probably miss out on a lot of players since many won't bother to download something they don't even have a clue in which direction the game is going. It would be a shame as there are not too many dark themed HS games out there.
The trick is to reveal a little enough to entice people to download to try and yet retaining flexibility by keeping things vague. Now your demo situation is more like totally no info rather than being vague.
Hope this helps!
I completely understand where you’re coming from. Right now, I'm still finding my niche and learning the intricacies of game development, which is why the game is marked as being in development with a demo version. My goal with this early release is to set the stage and build interest without revealing too much, but I get that it might currently feel a bit too vague.
As the game progresses, especially with the first major update to version 0.1, more elements of the story will be revealed where they need to be. I’m aiming to strike that balance you mentioned, and I really appreciate your insights on how to improve that approach. Thanks for your support, and I hope you’ll check back to see how the game evolves!
You're welcome! I look forward to playing maybe a V0.3 or 0.4 ;-)
Planned tags?
Thank you for your interest! Here are the planned tags for my game:
NSFW: The game contains adult content.
Visual Novel: It's primarily a narrative-driven experience.
Fantasy: The story includes fantasy elements.
Mystery: The plot involves mysterious and intriguing elements.
Romance: The game features romantic interactions.
Erotic: It includes erotic content as part of the storyline.
Yes, we know the game contains adult content, what is the tags like harem, oral sex, and the game theme like horror, monsters, the story in general
Lemme refine my question: what kind of adult content do you plan on adding?
The adult content in the game will primarily include romantic and erotic scenes that explore the relationships between characters. These will be consensual and story-driven, aiming to deepen the connection between characters and enhance the narrative. There will also be elements of fantasy to add some unique twists to these interactions.
I’m focused on creating a mix of romance, intimacy, and passion, without venturing into more extreme fetishes. The goal is to ensure the content feels natural within the story and appealing to a wide range of players. If there are any specific aspects you’re concerned about or would like to see, feel free to let me know!
I'm sorry, but that was a non-answer. At least we clarified that noncon and dubcon aren't going to be there.